Assessment for Mike Oldfield - "Muse"
Very good performance, Bob. After a slightly shaky start (erratic rhythm guitar timing causing a slight swing feel to creep in) you played the whole melody with authority and perfect phrasing, and have largely overcome the unintentional staccato like quality you were previously having with melody pieces like this.
If I were to suggest what might be improved with this piece it would be the introduction of vibrato on the long notes, and variation in dynamic range (loud/soft). You might also make more of the incidental slurring (sliding) between notes.
Very good performance, Bob. After a slightly shaky start (erratic rhythm guitar timing causing a slight swing feel to creep in) you played the whole melody with authority and perfect phrasing, and have largely overcome the unintentional staccato like quality you were previously having with melody pieces like this.
If I were to suggest what might be improved with this piece it would be the introduction of vibrato on the long notes, and variation in dynamic range (loud/soft). You might also make more of the incidental slurring (sliding) between notes.